Love is like a river
Keeps flowing without stopping
Sometimes cold as freezer
Hot as amber
Heart burning and beating
Love is like a river
Blood thirsty killer
Brutal words from your month, flowing
Sometimes cold as freezer
Creamy as the butter
Heart melts when you’re smiling
Love is like a river
bitter
When you are with other boy, playing
Sometimes cold as freezer
Light as the feather
Intense as taking exams
Love is like a river
Always fresh and clear
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Good analogy of comparing something hot and cold.
ReplyDeleteThink about your middle lines. Continue to show, not tell.