You came toward me like a sweetest candy
Seduced me with your overwhelming charms
As a bird attracted to the berry
I fall soft into your warm opened heart
I gave you everything that you asked for
Empty but happy because you were here
Different than any other girls I met
You were special, like a diamond on sand
As if I was dreaming, you disappeared
After taking everything that I had
Without any affection left with me
You were normal sand, like any others
Throw me into deep and dark loneliness
Leave me until I suffocate and die
First beautiful but soon it depraves,
This is how all pretentious love works
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Throw me into deep and dark loneliness
Leave me until I suffocate and die
First beautiful but soon it depraves,
Loved your interpretation of love!! Good job showing!!