Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Reflection
Mrs. Gunther came to our class and she made connection between choices and bible verses. There were lots of thing that we should do regarding to God's words such as fearing LORD and teaching wise. This reminded me that choice I make for college should not just be simple choice but much deeper meaning. It was fun having Mrs. Gunther as our helper for choice making.
Thursday, September 10, 2009
Reflection
1. You are telling other people about your story so it was different then a essays that we usually write. It was interesting writing that showed my dramatic moment. I had a less pressure on this project because writing narrative essay was writing about myself. I liked it.
2. I wrote down all the random information at tree outline. From there, I wrote another written outline including all the good supports and excluded all the random, useless stuff. I tried to think in other person's shoes and read my supporting details. If I can related them to the thesis then I included and it if didn't, I excluded them.
3. For creating unique piece, I tried to put as much details as I can to make it interesting and fun to read. For the expectation, I tried to use varieties of vocabularies and tried using correct grammars.
4. My audience was teacher and students. I didn't use like oxford dictionary words but try using some of the SAT words. It was easy to write an essay with simple vocabularies but It was sometimes difficult to put some complicated vocabulary that matched with the easy one.
5. Personal experience and faith shaped my essays because I used example with it. This whole story was about my story so personal experience was crucial part of the story.
6. I will be extremely difficult because you need experience to be able to have a successes. It is hard to just get perfect at first time.
2. I wrote down all the random information at tree outline. From there, I wrote another written outline including all the good supports and excluded all the random, useless stuff. I tried to think in other person's shoes and read my supporting details. If I can related them to the thesis then I included and it if didn't, I excluded them.
3. For creating unique piece, I tried to put as much details as I can to make it interesting and fun to read. For the expectation, I tried to use varieties of vocabularies and tried using correct grammars.
4. My audience was teacher and students. I didn't use like oxford dictionary words but try using some of the SAT words. It was easy to write an essay with simple vocabularies but It was sometimes difficult to put some complicated vocabulary that matched with the easy one.
5. Personal experience and faith shaped my essays because I used example with it. This whole story was about my story so personal experience was crucial part of the story.
6. I will be extremely difficult because you need experience to be able to have a successes. It is hard to just get perfect at first time.
Saturday, August 22, 2009
Article Summary
-Food Biotechnology
This article has very organized idea and paragraphs. I will give this article 5 because it has clear theme of the article which is Food Biotechnology. Also, it talks about history of the biotechnology which gives out background information before it goes into the main topic. Paragraphs are first starting with main idea and then goes into miner details. At last paragraphs it even gives out the website aobut the food biotechnology.
http://www.goarticles.com/cgi-bin/showa.cgi?C=1891008
-Making Money with Free Blog
This article shows step by step how to make a blog and how to use it to make money. I'll give 4 for this article because there are lots of data but it is kind of hard to follow the steps. It will be hard for people to know right away what to do. Also, their are less opinion about it. Everything is just datas. Maybe putting some personal way to make effective blog will make this article a 5.
http://www.goarticles.com/cgi-bin/showa.cgi?C=734949
This article has very organized idea and paragraphs. I will give this article 5 because it has clear theme of the article which is Food Biotechnology. Also, it talks about history of the biotechnology which gives out background information before it goes into the main topic. Paragraphs are first starting with main idea and then goes into miner details. At last paragraphs it even gives out the website aobut the food biotechnology.
http://www.goarticles.com/cgi-bin/showa.cgi?C=1891008
-Making Money with Free Blog
This article shows step by step how to make a blog and how to use it to make money. I'll give 4 for this article because there are lots of data but it is kind of hard to follow the steps. It will be hard for people to know right away what to do. Also, their are less opinion about it. Everything is just datas. Maybe putting some personal way to make effective blog will make this article a 5.
http://www.goarticles.com/cgi-bin/showa.cgi?C=734949
How do you know an idea to write about is “good”? What is the hardest aspect of making an idea a complete paper?
I know an idea to write about is "good" if I have lots of things to write about. Also, if there are many datas, it becomes better. In addition, if there are many opinions about it, it is good chance for me to persuade others to come to my side. Hardest aspect of making an idea a complete paper is getting shocking but also reliable datas. Also, making my piece all coherent difficult for me because I usually get out of topic that I'm writing about.
Monday, August 17, 2009
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